Howdy MG,
I was able to listen to this fairly closely to what you intended. I used Merllin Creative, with the Haigi Flute, but I'm not sure which legato violin you used, so I substituted one I had from some string quartet font I'd picked up. Good stuff
This piece has a great feeling of nostalgia to me. I'm wondering if perhaps the psychology of that is related to your use of the split up melody line.
Is there a story that goes with the title of this piece? I enjoyed it, and it's now in my "MG Jacobs" collection
ttfn,
Sherry