Allibs Song

Thank you both. The truth is, I haven't worried much about key changes, staff sound changes, etc... just trying to get it totally done and listenable, not the score. Whenever I need to I'll just go back and edit the score. No Alli hasn't heard it yet, and it will not have any lyrics... I wish it could but, first, personally I can't imagine it with lyrics, and second, I'm horrible at writing lyrics, and don't have much experience there. Anyways, I showed my older sister the midi, and told her to criticize away. She hesitated then said the part with the drawn out chords with the drawn out vibes got a little too drawn out, slightly boring, something like that... I listened to the part again and agreed. I haven't revised it yet, but will very soon.

~Daniel